LA LA LAND! By: Katie Maine

Horse.

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I picked a horse to be my world mascot because a horse is essentially free. And they are happy animals to add to that.

Name:
I chose this name because in my Utopia people can do what they please, when they want to. Plus I think its a cute name for a world.

La La Land Declaration of Independence:
I want to make La La land because their are so many things that aren't free anymore. For example school. Public school used to be a place where children, or people would go to get a free education. A place where all different races, and sex could go to learn so that they can have an affective future. Now a days there are so many things that cost money in school, or so many specifications for making it to the next year. AIMS. AIMS and tests like it are just excuses for the government to judge if we are smart enough and if we deserve to graduate. AIMS used to be a test that judged if the teachers were getting the information through to the kids or not. Now its a test to see how smart we are? No way. What if those teachers arent doing a good enough job on teaching us? We have to pay for it in the end if we fail. Not fair in my opinion. Thats why in La La Land you dont have to take the AIMS, and there is no school you don't want to go.

Another reason I would make La La Land is because these days the government restricts people too much. One way the government restricts us is by putting age limits on everything. Teenagers cant do anything without being questioned if they are old enough to be doing it. In my world we are free do as we please, and I don't mean like in this world where your free t do as you please, but you have to be a certain age. Nope. In my world you are free to do what you want. Its your life and if you want to mess it up with being stupid then thats your right. Another thing that the government does to restrict us is they put a price and everything. If you really think about you have to pay for everything you do. Parking, eating, school, work, traveling. What happened to free? In the land of opportunities they sure are making it hard to be successful if all we do is pay for stuff we want, or want to do. It's ridiculous, so thats why in La La Land everything is free. (There are a few grammatical mistakes that need to be fixed.)

Motto and seal of La La Land:
Motto: “Family means too much, friends are too valuable, and life is too short, to put-off sharing with people, how much they really mean to you, and pursuing whatever it is that makes you happy.” - (Unknown)

--This is my motto because life is too short to be worring (SP) about the little things. Instead you should be able to enjoy what you have, and do what you've always wanted to do. Thats what life should be about.
Seal: (Where's the seal?)


--This is my seal because love, friendship, truth, and free will are all the most important traits in my utopia.

La La Land rules:
1. Have fun!
2. No forcing anyone to do something they don't wish to do.
3. No killing anyone.
4. No making fun of other people.
5. No stealing, because everything is essentially free.
6.Don’t stress
7. Do what you want!
8. Treat others with respect.
9. Don’t misuse the privileges given in La La Land.
10. Don’t trash the place we live in.
--These are La La Land’s rules because in this world there are a lot of priveliged (SP) that need to be respected, in order for the world to run right. But also in La La Land there aren’t many rules that need to be followed. The basic drift of my rules are to enjoy yourself, but in a way that doesn’t harm anyone else in the process.

Government:
Democracy/monarchy
--My government is a cross between democracy and monarchy. Basically I will appoint different people from the different groups of types of people in La La Land. So depending on how many different groups of people there are in my world will change the number of members in my group. We will then as a government makes the decisions that our world needs including rules, and such like that. Then we will present them to the public. All of the people that are in my government will be levelheaded people, and it will be fair for the people because there are a variety of different people that can represent each individual in my world.

This is well put together. Please make sure that you spend enough time editing the grammatical problems will start to cost more and more. You lost points for not having your name at the top of the site and the grammatical issues.